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         Who was the teacher who made a difference in your life?

April 21, 2008

Share a poem about your most influential teacher…

Filed under: Share your teacher! — writingfix2 @ 2:32 pm



For the poets out there, I challenge you to compose an original poem about that teacher from your past who made a difference.  In Nikki Grimes’ awesome chapter book, Bronx Masquerade, students share important life moments in the form of short narratives, and then those same students tell the same stories in the form of short poems.  This is a great revision activity; if your students have written a narrative, challenge them to turn it into a poem with the same message.

No rules for these poems to post here.  Simply capture your teacher’s impact with a poem that celebrates him/her.

Simply type or copy/paste your poem into the “Leave a Comment” box below.  It will be published here once it is approved by the moderator.

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  1. terry(Pat was our principal) Anita was a teacher across the hall. She was cute, in a Whoopie Goldberg way. She wore granny glasses and lots of pigtails. She was snazzy and outspoken and very kind. She shared a writing lesson with us and we learned that she wanted the words to “flow like butter” but she said budda. She moved to Chicago to be with her family. We didn’t want her to go. She took some of our spirit with her, so I wrote her this poem. It’s called

    Goodbye, Girl

    You could silence a room
    just by crossing your arms,
    the look in your eye
    showed the world your charm.

    Your class read the paper
    and learned through the news,
    they memorized poetry
    all by Langston Hughes.

    Anita, we’ll miss you
    when you move to Chicago.
    If it’s really so great there
    why can’t we just all go?

    Your memory will linger
    long after you vacate,
    (We’ll all still have Pat
    that we have to placate.)

    We’ll remember your kind words
    if we start to stutter,
    your vision of everything
    flowin’ like butter.

      Terry Stelle — April 20, 2009 @ 8:34 pm

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